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Nature Sings

Foggy

It’s silence solemnly musical

Drifting deeply into itself

Alone

Hugged by fog that blankets the forest

Discreetly whispering sweet nothing

Yet seductive

Fortunately sheltered from the sordidness of mankind

With a ghostly air flowing amongst it

Bringing alive nature that breathes

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Original

It’s silence solemn

Drifting

Alone

Hugged by fog

Discreetly sheltered

Wind whispering

Silently

seductive

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Second revision

It’s silence solemnly musical
Drifting deeply into itself
Alone
Hugged by fog that blankets the forest
Discreetly whispering sweet nothing
Yet silently seductive
*Although sheltered from the sordidness of mankind
With a ghostly air flowing amongst it
That’s life-giving

SLS Oborowsky

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